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Melissa Adams
is on page 298 of 544
I am enjoying the story, my only problem is how Violet’s “plans” are kept secret from the reader. We’re in her head so it’s confusing. Can’t really keep secrets in 1st POV.
— May 25, 2025 08:14PM
Melissa Adams
is 32% done
Xaden’s struggle against the venin/channeling makes me think of someone struggling with an addiction. I wonder if Yarros intended that similarity. The way his emotions/temper are on edge and harder to control, how he isn’t even aware when he gets sucked into channeling.
— May 21, 2025 07:27PM
Melissa Adams
is on page 42 of 544
Am I supposed to know what’s going on? Because I don’t know what’s going on.
— May 20, 2025 04:27PM

