Melissa Adams’s Reviews > Onyx Storm > Status Update

I am enjoying the story, my only problem is how Violet’s “plans” are kept secret from the reader. We’re in her head so it’s confusing. Can’t really keep secrets in 1st POV.

Xaden’s struggle against the venin/channeling makes me think of someone struggling with an addiction. I wonder if Yarros intended that similarity. The way his emotions/temper are on edge and harder to control, how he isn’t even aware when he gets sucked into channeling.

Am I supposed to know what’s going on? Because I don’t know what’s going on.