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Paige
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p.123 – we still aren’t liking it.
The Osha (butterfly) nickname…. 🤦
p.144 – Ask a man about his cock – girl.
Oh and the reaction to the “Osha” name – babe, relax, he’s said it like twice.
The next couple of pages where the writing is trying to get us to feel that she is into him feels forced.
— May 31, 2025 05:12AM
The Osha (butterfly) nickname…. 🤦
p.144 – Ask a man about his cock – girl.
Oh and the reaction to the “Osha” name – babe, relax, he’s said it like twice.
The next couple of pages where the writing is trying to get us to feel that she is into him feels forced.
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Paige
is on page 520 of 624
FKN WHAAAAT and I mean HWWWWAT re actual meaning behind “Osha”
The set-up is so fkn bad. I have no feels for this other than I FEEL it could have hit so much harder if it was constructed and executed WELL!
The oracle mother? That didn’t see the dad’s death, her new marriage, or her daughter becoming enthralled… Yeah ok, ok 🤦 Not a very good oracle.
— May 31, 2025 05:23AM
The set-up is so fkn bad. I have no feels for this other than I FEEL it could have hit so much harder if it was constructed and executed WELL!
The oracle mother? That didn’t see the dad’s death, her new marriage, or her daughter becoming enthralled… Yeah ok, ok 🤦 Not a very good oracle.
Paige
is on page 490 of 624
480 – Oh yeah SURE, feed and pet your fox for a whole half hour when you’re on a ticking fkn clock in a war where one of your so-called “friends”’ life is HANGING BY A LITERAL THREAD OMG.
p.487–489 – The rushed “oh right, the tattoos ughhhh”
They = true mates, which SHOCK hasn’t been a thing for the loooongest time.
Oh and THOSE ones are only for IMPORTANT couples but one ALWAYS dies?!?! STFU.
— May 31, 2025 05:22AM
p.487–489 – The rushed “oh right, the tattoos ughhhh”
They = true mates, which SHOCK hasn’t been a thing for the loooongest time.
Oh and THOSE ones are only for IMPORTANT couples but one ALWAYS dies?!?! STFU.
Paige
is on page 477 of 624
“I lied, you are a good thief” – is he alluding to his heart? Man, stfu.
Leading up to Ch. 31 where she says “friends” – who is she talking about? Ren? Carrion? Lorreth even? Whilst there’s mutual fondness, no one feels like friends.
Innir or Irrin? girl, pick and maybe edit the damn book.
“He’ll never forgive me if his sole reason for living…” girl he was RESPONSIBILITIES where he wanna die ?
— May 31, 2025 05:20AM
Leading up to Ch. 31 where she says “friends” – who is she talking about? Ren? Carrion? Lorreth even? Whilst there’s mutual fondness, no one feels like friends.
Innir or Irrin? girl, pick and maybe edit the damn book.
“He’ll never forgive me if his sole reason for living…” girl he was RESPONSIBILITIES where he wanna die ?
Paige
is on page 392 of 624
Girl, where does it detail how she’s coming up with the alchemy /tests??
Not even a “here’s some ingredients and why I choose them,” just bang and no flash in the fkn pan, man.
p.313 – The first tent scene came out of nowhere. Things are lacklustre if there’s no build, for the love of god.
p.368 – “It’s a sex thing” – drinking blood makes your dick harder. Even as a euphemism, that is fkn dumb.
— May 31, 2025 05:18AM
Not even a “here’s some ingredients and why I choose them,” just bang and no flash in the fkn pan, man.
p.313 – The first tent scene came out of nowhere. Things are lacklustre if there’s no build, for the love of god.
p.368 – “It’s a sex thing” – drinking blood makes your dick harder. Even as a euphemism, that is fkn dumb.
Paige
is on page 229 of 624
💙 p.152 – “Bad human” 🤣🤣
💙 p.157 – OK now this is a scene of mutual attraction I can get behind.
(They then ruined it by making it gross on p.158.)
💙 p.172 – NOW the character connection reads naturally.
💙 First near spicy scene turned thieveryyyy.
— May 31, 2025 05:16AM
💙 p.157 – OK now this is a scene of mutual attraction I can get behind.
(They then ruined it by making it gross on p.158.)
💙 p.172 – NOW the character connection reads naturally.
💙 First near spicy scene turned thieveryyyy.
Paige
is on page 119 of 624
😤She kinda h8 😤
> It took way too long to get into the story.
>The external world building outside of the main body seems irrelevant.
>The writing isn’t exactly janky but it is packed in so much that it doesn’t flow naturally.
— May 31, 2025 05:07AM
> It took way too long to get into the story.
>The external world building outside of the main body seems irrelevant.
>The writing isn’t exactly janky but it is packed in so much that it doesn’t flow naturally.
