Jessica’s Reviews > Tears of the Wolf > Status Update

I am struggling 26 pages in. I love Elizabeth Wheatley’s personality; it is what drew me into her YouTube and therefore hopes of a great series. But, as I’ve found out, many self-published, self-edited authors are missing constructive criticism on their work.
The premise is good and strong but on page one we start with Wheatley telling us rather than showing us and I don’t know if I can push through.