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Everest is saving this one for me

Oh Susanne (I know it's you), it's so hard to read Vesper's POV, it's so badly written 😩

Sorry but... Why's Vesper so "amazing"? It's kind of annoying. Does she have any defect? (I mean, bc her chapters always show her being soooo badass and powerful and 'not like other girls' and irresistible and beautiful and whatever) heheheh I hope she gets more depth

"[...] but I ignored them all, giving no notice to the lumps of rock WHICH smacked against my spine or the rain of gravel WHICH threatened to blind me."

Oh, gosh... I did NOT miss the amount of time Suzanne likes to use the word "which" instead of "that" for the POVs she writes. (it was the same with Tory, and now it's Vesper, ughhhhh)