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Jery Schober
is 38% done
Wow. This is awful. Really, really awful. All tell, no show. Example? MC watching a parade, thinking to himself: "This was quite exciting." Whoa, sends just shivers of excitement down my spine reading ALL. THIS. EMOTION.
The author obviously has no idea about history, sociology, politics or an ounce of common sense. I doubt she ever read a good fantasy book. Maybe fairy tales.
— Sep 08, 2016 09:38AM
The author obviously has no idea about history, sociology, politics or an ounce of common sense. I doubt she ever read a good fantasy book. Maybe fairy tales.
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Jery Schober
is 58% done
Still shaking my head in wonder at the total lack of respect for the king from any of his subjects.
— Sep 12, 2016 12:14PM
Jery Schober
is 16% done
The slave not acting like a slave, the prince not behaving like a prince, but the mage filling every stereotype there is - I'm confused.
— Sep 06, 2016 01:32AM
