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the author is so sweet so i feel bad saying this:
but like this is so hard to read😭 writing is choppy, and the dialogue is really basic at best. i think if possible she would really benefit from a professional editor, or at least another person who reads over and makes actual edits
— Jun 05, 2025 11:35AM
but like this is so hard to read😭 writing is choppy, and the dialogue is really basic at best. i think if possible she would really benefit from a professional editor, or at least another person who reads over and makes actual edits
