Bridget’s Reviews > Magic for Liars > Status Update
Bridget
is 65% done
The dialogue is so cheesy. The MC’s inner monologue is embarrassingly juvenile. She’s annoying and immature. The magic leaves a lot to be desired; this is not HP level of world building.
really wish the MC had more personality than: woman PI 🕵️♀️, secret alcoholic, sad sister/mama drama, wah im not magic, poor taste in men.
I feel like this was written by a 21 year old.
— Jun 04, 2025 07:10PM
really wish the MC had more personality than: woman PI 🕵️♀️, secret alcoholic, sad sister/mama drama, wah im not magic, poor taste in men.
I feel like this was written by a 21 year old.
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