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Starlight
is 90% done
what a shit story
it had potential
but so many cliches and tropes
the lack of editing
little to no chemistry between mcs
sex scenes were boring af
plot was nonexistent and stupid
dialogue was cute for a hot second when the mmc was seemingly dumb and the earnest
i really want to put this on my utter shit shelf
— Jun 05, 2025 12:39PM
it had potential
but so many cliches and tropes
the lack of editing
little to no chemistry between mcs
sex scenes were boring af
plot was nonexistent and stupid
dialogue was cute for a hot second when the mmc was seemingly dumb and the earnest
i really want to put this on my utter shit shelf
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Starlight
is 92% done
i change my mind
this is def going on my shit shelf
it’s a good example of shitty writing .
— Jun 05, 2025 12:43PM
this is def going on my shit shelf
it’s a good example of shitty writing .
Starlight
is 91% done
the cringe was everywhere
the few blurbs i read for the other books in the series were short and stupid
not at all interested in these other princes
let alone the shitty portrayals so far og the fmc human women that are supposed to be heroines
she said it herself
she’s no princess or queen
i do not stan
— Jun 05, 2025 12:42PM
the few blurbs i read for the other books in the series were short and stupid
not at all interested in these other princes
let alone the shitty portrayals so far og the fmc human women that are supposed to be heroines
she said it herself
she’s no princess or queen
i do not stan
Starlight
is 11% done
ok so far so good
that line where this mmc is practicing what he’ll say 😭 adorable
— Jun 05, 2025 11:41AM
that line where this mmc is practicing what he’ll say 😭 adorable
