Toni’s Reviews > Perfect In Death > Status Update

Weirdest chapter one ever. I felt a little like Alice when she realized Wonderland was just pure nonsense. This disjointed beginning was not the best way to start a story in my opinion. It was like someone's odd pile of notes typed up and they called it chapter one. I hope this gets better. Chapter two features the Hailey tagged on the cover. I hope her chapter is a bit more understandable or I may DNF this early