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kate
is 2% done
“twenty-two”
a grown ass man thirsting after a 22 year old 😭 not fucking good at alllll
and it’s not the relationship that’s the problem. it’s the fact that he assessed her body already
— Jun 13, 2025 01:07PM
a grown ass man thirsting after a 22 year old 😭 not fucking good at alllll
and it’s not the relationship that’s the problem. it’s the fact that he assessed her body already
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kate
is 3% done
i can’t do this shit, he’s NAWT it idk and idc. also the prose is kinda meh. not bad in a clanky/awkward way, but in a “this is just not very good because this could have been more condensed than it is now”
— Jun 13, 2025 01:19PM
kate
is 3% done
“But there was nothing respectable about the way I was imagining Liz in soaking wet clothes”
disgusting actually. they JUST met. she’s 23. like she’s not a kid but DUDE. i fucking hate it when men in books are like that (well irl too but can’t do shit abt it). like make her want her mind, not her body. don’t be a disgusting dog like that
— Jun 13, 2025 01:08PM
disgusting actually. they JUST met. she’s 23. like she’s not a kid but DUDE. i fucking hate it when men in books are like that (well irl too but can’t do shit abt it). like make her want her mind, not her body. don’t be a disgusting dog like that
