Aimee’s Reviews > Afterlove > Status Update

-Great meaningful points but some don’t correspond with the events of the plot.
-Feeling nervy

-still a lot of plot wholes
-some previous ones filled
Great concept, but too hard to execute

-Wish the laws of the universe were explained in detail.
-Characters actions feel slightly false to their nature.
-Feeling slightly rushed at the climax.
-Awkwardly phrased references.

Some quotes that don’t make sense?

A lot of forgettable recurring references.
Wish there was more emphasis on them.
Still ain’t too sure where this book is going.