Bronwyn Heeley’s Reviews > Black and Brown > Status Update
Bronwyn Heeley
is 15% done
There are way too many chapter. It’s very unnecessary, like I get shot chapters leaving things tense or keeping you going back every other page another chapter… and the chapter being mid scene, with the same character pov. It’s al so very unnecessary and honestly kinda getting to me (I’m at chap 14, 15%, page 49/295)
— Jun 18, 2025 05:42AM
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