Katie’s Reviews > That Time I Got Drunk and Saved a Demon > Status Update

Wooooooooooooooow, this is bad. The basic setup for the story is alright, but the dialogue feels disconnected from the world the author has made. It's words and phrases from here but in a fantasy setting, and most of it is cringe-inducing. Eg: 'Mr Snarls-a-lot' and 'Ass whopping alligators' are within a page of each other.