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Mike
Mike is 71% done
The plot doesn't make a lick of sense, and is driven by coincidence, accident, poor planning and the malicious acts of rivals.
Jun 19, 2025 03:23PM
Tom Swift and His Submarine Boat (Tom Swift Sr, #4)

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Mike
Mike is 31% done
Convenient Eavesdrop AND an Inconvenient Eavesdrop. Low-effort plot advancement.
Jun 19, 2025 01:54PM
Tom Swift and His Submarine Boat (Tom Swift Sr, #4)


Mike
Mike is 10% done
Right away, false urgency. They rush construction of the sub and decide not to enter for a valuable government prize in order to go after treasure - treasure that isn't going anywhere, and that nobody else can reach.

Also, anyone much older than Tom gets the adjective "aged".
Jun 19, 2025 01:18PM
Tom Swift and His Submarine Boat (Tom Swift Sr, #4)


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