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Story one, Unknown by unknown started off very strong and then fell flat on its face in the last two pages. I thought that there was going to be a very strong reveal, and instead I was just left wondering what I was supposed to do with all of these pieces of a story that were given to me. 1.5/5
— Jun 19, 2025 03:26PM
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Li Fan seemed to be very impactful for some people because of the reverse order that the story is told in. For me it was just very confusing while reading, and I didn't catch on until the second to last paragraph. Then after I had caught on it just made me confused and a toddlers level of grumpy. I didn't like the story at all because of this one single thing.
— Jun 19, 2025 03:42PM
