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Vim is starting
First chapter. I'll let the infodumping slide. I wish it was paced slower but it is what it is. I got a headache from the jump from one paragraph to another seemingly connected paragraph but like there's a missing connecting thought. Not even a thought, just a phrase like "instead of X"... (Re: Clover Press and Vanguard)
Jun 24, 2025 08:04AM
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Vim is 2% done
MC: Henry is the model husband, restored my faith in romance. (Doesn't say why)
MC, literally two pages later: I thought he'd be more around since my sister got pregnant (high risk).

Can't decide yet if it's an inconsistency or is there a secret commentary here 🤭
Jun 26, 2025 09:25AM
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