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Maddison
is 80% done
The level of innocuous detail in this book is horrible. I’m going to see it through but as of right now, (4/5th done) you can skip whole pages and still follow the storyline. The chapters from the teenage brother’s perspective are written exactly the way an angry woman with a pain in the ass teenage son would write the inside of her son’s mind. It’s contrite, overwritten, and needed research.
— Jun 24, 2025 09:31AM
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Maddison
is 50% done
The overly detailed internal commentary from all the perspectives is exhausting. Also, why isn’t Meredith telling her husband about these ominous text messages if she’s done nothing wrong? Plot hole for way too long, makes the story feel unrealistic and makes it dragggggg along.
— Jun 03, 2025 03:17PM
