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Amused by first couple of paragraphs of ch3 - Stan's POV.

It's interesting. I think one could say that there is no doubt there's a man behind this book. Coarse language and obsession with "tits" might be a turn-off to some people.

Dammit. My selective internal editor switched on. I'd get rid of the "And" and just leave it as Jack died.

Ooh-kay. POV change in the middle of narrative. I think that's a no-no. This Ginger character is kind of freaky. Like that she is though. Most villains like her tend to be male.

OMG. But doing well so far ignoring punctuation and possible grammar errors.

First impression of first page: Whoa. Kind of funny. Second page: Girl's should be Girls.