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Sherry Boak
Sherry Boak is 56% done
I don't know if I can do it. This book is PAINFUL! You don't have to give a metaphor for every emotion, moment,
Jun 24, 2025 12:27PM
We Were Never Here

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Sherry Boak
Sherry Boak is 56% done
I don't think I can do it. This book is bad. It's moving so SLOW. The main character is so whiny. Her inner dialog is painfully repetitive.The author uses too many metaphors. I think she should just get a thesaurus and use adjectives and adverbs, preferably ONE worded, to describe an action, or a feeling. Instead she writes things like, "her words slid across the room like a hockey puck on ice." Augh.
Jun 24, 2025 12:51PM
We Were Never Here


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