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Why does it scream that this book hasn't been through an editor after she re-wrote it??
Literally on page 142 it says a character is naked from the waist up, but not even 10 sentences later (like half a page), the same person is being asked to remove his shirt.. Please don't let there be any more mistakes like this, I really want to love this book..! 🙏🏻🫠
— Oct 25, 2025 02:21PM
Literally on page 142 it says a character is naked from the waist up, but not even 10 sentences later (like half a page), the same person is being asked to remove his shirt.. Please don't let there be any more mistakes like this, I really want to love this book..! 🙏🏻🫠
