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The story is good fun and all but this book should have been proofread more. Mixing up two of ur main characters names really does a number on the limited immersion that's already been built up. Also why is everyone so dumb, this is so hard to believe and invest in rn I'm getting frustrated, but I do like the premise UGHH
— Jun 28, 2025 10:58AM
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I guessed the ending several chapters ago and yet another easy spelling error that should be caught it makes me cringe man and during a climatic event 🤦♀️
— Jun 30, 2025 12:37PM
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Jun 28, 2025 11:00AM
ALSO one of the most offensive lines I have read recently was here aka the "suck and slap of the waves" no don't say suck and slap. Slap fine, on its own or with any other words. Please don't. . Please
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Like tell me how the fuck u identify a missing person and contact their family. Go missing in 1998 there's going to be digital files. IT WOULD SAY MISSING 1998. Yet you don't have that information, ur like yuh she was like missing last week. K bitch what report u referring to then? HOW DID U EVEN SCREAM OK BUT THEN YALL HAVE HER CORRECT BIRTH YEAR BUT NOT THE MISSING PERSONS REPORT FROM THE YEAR THEY WENT MISSING BUT EVERYONES LIKE YEAH MAKES SENSE SHES STILL A CHILD wait i think im angrier about this then i thought
She did it again. Lick and suck. Suck and slap. I think I am done for today.