Beatriz’s Reviews > Onyx Storm > Status Update

This last part of the book is actually good - getting me in my feelings.

The romance is starting to be what annoys me in this book. Everything else is fine and getting interesting as the book progresses... but the romance is just not doing it for me. It feels like more of the same. The same type of annoying lines/thoughts/actions for eachother.

Only being interesting when there is an action scene. Otherwise just feels like more of the same annoying/confusing lines

Finally getting more interesting almost halfway through the book

Sometimes I just stare at the pages staring at a line and wondering how someone could possibly say something so silly/stupid.
Getting more interesting though.

Somethings are not very well written? It's strange... some parts of the story are like puzzle pieces that don't quite go together... hard to understand