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Ariel
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Writing is tactical, very matter of fact, lot of information at once.
— Jul 06, 2025 10:47PM
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Ariel
is 46% done
I am struggling with this one. There are several chapters that are deep and thoughtful, that are sweet and develop the characters. Others that are full of action and push the plot. However there are several that are stuffy and full of a pretention almost that it slows everything down. I am mixed about the whole story because of it.
— Jul 13, 2025 02:27PM
