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Delicious! Wonderfully comforting and exceptionally good ust. I could definitely do without the girl-shaming, though; Tuck and his running through girls really objectifies women as a mass whole in this story. Which is a serious offense in mm fic, I believe. But the rest of the story is good enough for me to overlook for now.
— Oct 01, 2016 06:01AM
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Pretty good read! Way better than many professionally produced novels. But there were a few things that irritated me: the near total women objectification (one girl mentioned in passing--maybe two sentences--in entire story who wasn't simply a sex object); and, shocking as it is to say this, it was too long. The epic tension went from gold to an impatient shade of bronze.
— Oct 01, 2016 06:25AM
