Sally’s Reviews > Disgraced Return of the Kap's Needle > Status Update
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This is already v tell and not show, it’s almost like reading a report or instructions
— Jul 14, 2025 12:24AM
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The rivalry between Hannah and Reva would’ve been more suspenseful without the opening chapter so it would’ve been more of a is she right or paranoid situation
— Jul 14, 2025 12:59AM
