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Haley
is 20% done
I'm mostly skimming already-- take out the sex and this would be good for middle grade. It does read like I was reading a fantasy from that age range-- doesn't make it bad.
— Jul 14, 2025 01:24PM
Haley
is 5% done
The writing seems...um... juvenile... overly simple. But we will see.
— Jul 14, 2025 10:52AM
