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is 73% done
went from oh this feels like very skilled and beautiful writing to hmm. unsure at this point if the pov character feeling somewhat... empty is a wanted effect, or if she actually is lacking something. on paper, she should be intriguing to me. selfishly, i wish there were more of her observations of the environment too (don't mind me i'm not particularly invested in the plot ;;)
— Jul 17, 2025 09:57AM

