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is 15% done
Shiori doesn't sound like she's 17, she sounds like a 13 yo, whining all the damn time.
— Jul 15, 2025 05:36PM
S.
is 5% done
I've been in her head for 20 pages, I mean, she's not bad, but i start to feel some inconsistency, which is not good...
— Jul 10, 2025 07:44AM
