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Ay
is 32% done
i dont like it when the characters are talking to the reader directly... the monologues dont feel like them, they feel like theyre talking to the reader and i hate it... i also hate it that the word "bro" is used so much... not just between characters but in "monologues" etc, im cringing so hard HELP
— Jul 17, 2025 10:09AM
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Ay
is 74% done
the father literally had a whole personality switch? im so confused, cringing at all the bros like come on, lets stop that pls... im honestly just going to finish this book out of pettiness...
— Jul 18, 2025 02:03PM
Ay
is 52% done
ok its slightly better now with less usage of bro and the monologues are more normal, so much so, it feels like the book is written by multiple ppl? idk, but atleast im enjoying it a little now
— Jul 18, 2025 06:19AM
Ay
is 17% done
Its very insta-lovey, both MCs are already interested in eachother, but i dont find it boring yet? But im also curious what will happen in the next 83% of the book if theyre already sooo into eachother 😅
— Jul 17, 2025 12:09AM
