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In addition to previous comment, what is the point of the chapters that tell story of different items sold in shop?
What is the added value? If they will become relevant on page 200 or 300, then they should not be here as most would have forgotten the irrelevant stuff like this…
— Jul 19, 2025 05:13AM
What is the added value? If they will become relevant on page 200 or 300, then they should not be here as most would have forgotten the irrelevant stuff like this…
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By page 65 or 70 i realize i have not been introduced to the characters of story.
Kind of awkward to read not knowing who its about.
Also chapters tent to be short from multiple character point of view which makes reader confused what its about…
Its simple question: “who its about?” That i contineously ask in many chapters…
— Jul 19, 2025 03:13AM
Kind of awkward to read not knowing who its about.
Also chapters tent to be short from multiple character point of view which makes reader confused what its about…
Its simple question: “who its about?” That i contineously ask in many chapters…
