Tyler’s Reviews > Jake's Magical Market > Status Update

Hrm. The world building was already pretty tenuous from the start, but it's getting less believable as we go on. Add in that the writing really needed more polish to help it flow and be less repetitive (just had a point where the word 'card' was used in rapid succession about 8 times and that really could have been smoothed out.) Add to that...I'm really not a fan of this narrator in general. It's rough going.