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Kess Kesterton
is on page 260 of 410
I had just started enjoying it, and then it got so smutty I want to kill myself :( There's better ways of developing a dynamic between the characters, I aint wanna read these pages on pages of vampyre erotica
— Jul 20, 2025 10:29AM
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Kess Kesterton
is on page 76 of 410
"She stares at me with a mix of worry and hostility, like my kink is burning crickets with kerosene" The crickets :(
It's actually alright. The writing is very millenial, and feels as though geared towards an American audience - in that it over-explains to such extent that everything is blindingly obvious and no subtle foreshadowing survives the onslaught of exposition. Nonetheless, I am enjoying the story so far :D
— Jul 13, 2025 11:41AM
It's actually alright. The writing is very millenial, and feels as though geared towards an American audience - in that it over-explains to such extent that everything is blindingly obvious and no subtle foreshadowing survives the onslaught of exposition. Nonetheless, I am enjoying the story so far :D
Kess Kesterton
is on page 9 of 410
Eh. It's okay. The story is engaging and the premise is kinda cool. The writing style is lacking a certain elegance I'd expect from a Vampire novel, but I suppose this is fantasy moreso than gothic horror. Reading it on reception at work also brings down the vibe
— Jul 11, 2025 05:16AM
