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For the love of God, author, learn to use a semicolon. That's seven now I've had to write in for you.
Oct 10, 2016 05:22PM
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Cassidy is on page 111 of 290
Based on this page alone I can pretty much guarantee the big climactic scene at the end will be a group of people hunting down Ultima and she'll get shot and her dying words will be spoken to Ultima and we're all supposed to cry
I'm willing to bet money on this ending
Oct 02, 2016 02:33PM
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I already found two commas where there should be semicolons
Sep 25, 2016 06:31PM
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