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Ally
is 29% done
I kid you not this sentence really did appear in this book, spoken by an adult woman who is supposed to be of reasonable intelligence and maturity.
“You look like you’re bunged up and trying too hard to push to squeeze a poop out.”
This is going to be a long and painful read.
— Oct 11, 2016 05:29PM
“You look like you’re bunged up and trying too hard to push to squeeze a poop out.”
This is going to be a long and painful read.
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Ally
is 65% done
I was trying to think of something nice to say about the book. Like how the premise of a character raised in cult taught to hate something, then turning into the thing they hate and fear could make for some really interesting reading. Sadly it's all terribly executed, and the writing reeks of immaturity. I actively hate the main character
— Oct 12, 2016 06:15PM
Ally
is 43% done
The man who stood next to Yaya pointed his sword at Tad and me. “Serpents.” I pointed a finger back at him. “Donkey butthole.”
I'm just going to keep posting exceptionally stupid passages of this book whenever they occur.
— Oct 11, 2016 05:51PM
I'm just going to keep posting exceptionally stupid passages of this book whenever they occur.
