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Lindsey
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Fast paced. Leaves a desire for more detail. The story seems like it is developing well, but there isn’t much world-building detail. I don’t feel like I am IN the book, but the story is good so far.
— Jul 23, 2025 11:34PM
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Lindsey
is on page 147 of 240
feels rushed & lacks detail to make it feel real
— Jul 26, 2025 11:50PM
Lindsey
is on page 125 of 240
There’s like 5 different storylines & moods? It’s weird.
— Jul 26, 2025 12:09AM
