elijah’s Reviews > The Merchant of Death > Status Update

Author makes a lot of cringey dialogue choices that feel like he's trying too hard to write a movie script

The Competition Is Really Starting To Heat Up 🧍

YEAH you better feel like shit which prompts a change in character Bobby

OOH Bobby is quite the unlikeable protagonist, he's so cocky it's annoying but it makes his fuckups easier to enjoy

Restarting this series brings back memories. I never originally got to finish it but I plan to this time :)