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Jen Chen
is 68% done
Ok, now it feels less detached/distant. Adrissu’s pain 😭
— Jul 28, 2025 09:13PM
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Jen Chen
is 47% done
I really thought Adrissu would fly out to defend the city. I feel like the story did not spend enough time on his grief from losing Ruan. The fast forwarding makes the loss feel a bit distant.
— Jul 28, 2025 10:15AM
