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"As regret consumed every fiber of her being, a tear at last broke free and slipped down her face. She lay supine on the cold stone ground, and so the droplet rolled from the corner of her eye down her temple, and onto the unfeeling ground - rather than tracing the curve of her cheek."
— Jul 29, 2025 07:12AM
"As regret consumed every fiber of her being, a tear at last broke free and slipped down her face. She lay supine on the cold stone ground, and so the droplet rolled from the corner of her eye down her temple, and onto the unfeeling ground - rather than tracing the curve of her cheek."
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Finished formatting for publishing! One more read through. This fantasy book has me going for real! Hopefully it does the same for you.
— Nov 13, 2025 01:54PM
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Only twenty pages left to this edit! Super stoked. This book is incredible, not to toot my own horn, lol.
— Sep 26, 2025 06:10AM
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Even if two people, even identical twins, come from the same upbringing, internally they could be living in two worlds apart. Experiences breed growth, though growth may not always be upwards.
— Sep 19, 2025 07:54AM
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“Silence!” the guard barked. “Not another word! Ye know nothing of aught. One more word, and I’ll slit yer throat myself. We need not ye. Rayvn cares not for ye. ‘Tis the lass we need, and only the lass.”
— Sep 17, 2025 07:28AM
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Fear, for her family.
Love, for her family.
Yearning, for her family.
And many emotions that got lost in the maze of this internal, unrelenting storm.
— Sep 16, 2025 07:53AM
Love, for her family.
Yearning, for her family.
And many emotions that got lost in the maze of this internal, unrelenting storm.
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Eva, a captive now, fights her guard to avoid being violated and to keep her dignity.
— Sep 10, 2025 08:24AM
