Stevie’s Reviews > A Dark and Hollow Star > Status Update

The characterization is a little flat at this point; it feels like there's more tell than show. I think this is in part due to the PoV switching. the different PoVs do seem necessary to the plot, but it also means that you need to fit 4 main characters' characterization in the same amount of space you'd usually use for 1. So, I'm enjoying the plot, but the characters feel a bit like cardboard cutouts.