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average human
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Venni finally found a spot he was happy with and just stood there, looking up to a window on the fourth floor. I eyed the wall, searching possible routes up. I checked the cameras. None of them saw him.
He finally moved, going to climb up. I kept my expression blank as he approached, looking around. The moment Venni touched the wall, the trap activated.
— Aug 02, 2025 08:45PM
He finally moved, going to climb up. I kept my expression blank as he approached, looking around. The moment Venni touched the wall, the trap activated.
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average human
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She says she works bad with people and teamwork but she does this all flawlessly. She never really struggles or has to overcome a hardship or when she does something cool and overpowered it’s so watered down the reader is no longer interested. 3 stars.
— Aug 04, 2025 12:37AM
average human
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Ik this is a slow burn but I’m not shitting u when I say NOTHING HAPPENED. Like there was introductions for potential love interests but nothing concrete. And the plot didn’t really go anywhere. Just a whole lot of keep this one Dragon alive. And a whole lot of teasing of a potential new love interest in the dragon. Idk it’s not what was in the summary because Mc is a whole lot of talk.
— Aug 04, 2025 12:36AM
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The rest of the night went by quickly and in the early morning, Davies and Venni forced me to get a few hours of sleep, promising to wake me if anything happened. Nothing else as big happened, not after leaving Lombardi and Shanton to torture the captive, not while I slept, and not for most of the day.
— Aug 03, 2025 11:44PM
average human
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When I’d come into work this morning, I had brought a dress for dinner, knowing Lombardi wanted me there. I still didn’t understand why, but he was the boss man, and we technically weren’t supposed to question him.
— Aug 03, 2025 08:59AM
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Davies decided to try climbing a tree. He was fast and nimble, a surprise considering his size. I followed behind, getting more than enough exercise. I was not built to climb trees and crawl through small spaces.
He inched out on the branch and made a jump for the window ledge, grabbing on. The trap tried to react but there wasn’t enough energy in Davies and it fizzled out.
— Aug 02, 2025 08:55PM
He inched out on the branch and made a jump for the window ledge, grabbing on. The trap tried to react but there wasn’t enough energy in Davies and it fizzled out.
average human
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The inside was just as small as the outside, with enough seats for about twenty people. More than half the seats were filled. A table was empty, but hadn’t been cleared yet. An older woman walked through, wearing an apron.
“Just sit wherever,” she called out, heading over to clean the table.
Everyone looked content as they ate, and the food looked delicious.
— Aug 02, 2025 12:35PM
“Just sit wherever,” she called out, heading over to clean the table.
Everyone looked content as they ate, and the food looked delicious.
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I held it all back and built up the image that I wanted and infused the magic with it. Carefully and slowly, I hovered my hands over the devices, holding tightly onto the image I wanted. My muscles went through spasms, tightening and then loosening back up, matching the pulse of the magic. My limbs grew heavy, but I forced them to lower, my hands only inches away from the devices but still not touching.
— Aug 02, 2025 12:11PM



“Fuck,” he swore and then with the first part of the trap activated, the second one went to work, transporting him. Everything went smoothly on our end.
I used the tablet, flipping through the video feed until I came to the room he should have been moved to, and there he was in all his frustrated glory. He tried to break loose from the bindings. I made my way back to the others while keeping an eye on the screen. He couldn’t get loose. I pressed a few buttons. His vitals were stable.
“How did it go?” Davies asked.
“Success,” I replied and looked up to see everyone staring at me with interest. “Ami, you’re next.”
“Aw, no telling us more about Venni?” Ami asked.
I shook my head. “The less you know, the better,” I replied.
She huffed before moving toward the building. I followed behind like I did with Venni, noting how she wrapped magic around herself that made her invisible on the cameras—for the most part. If I looked close enough, all I could see on the screen was a slight distortion, and that was only because I knew to look for it.
She went a different route, always looking around her as she got closer to her target area. When she got there, she eyed her surroundings again.
There was a tree near the building, but the jump from the furthest branch to the building was one most humans wouldn’t be able to make.
Ami took note of the jump before reaching out to the tree. When her hand met the bark, the trap went off. She made a small moaning noise, and for a second, I thought something had gone wrong by the twisted expression on her face. Before I could react, she disappeared as the trap took her to the new location. I began moving toward the building, checking the camera. She made it to the designated room but was on the floor. I stared at her image, wishing for her to move. When she did, I sighed in relief and stopped moving, watching her.
She looked fine, and when I checked her vitals, they were all normal. Her heart rate was slightly higher than it should be, but not dangerously. She was okay. I’d have to talk to her about what happened before she was moved. That trap was a simple stun and transport, but she looked like she was in pain. I wasn’t into unnecessary pain, even with baddies. I didn’t want to hurt them. I just didn’t want them being able to escape.
I went back to the group. “Success number two,” I said with a grin. Everything just needed to keep going like that.
“Sarina, your turn,” I said.
She nodded, giving me a nervous smile, the confident woman I’d seen earlier was slowly losing it. “Where are the other two?” she asked.
I checked the cameras. They were still in their rooms. Venni was pouting in the corner. Okay, not pouting, but he was sitting in the corner, still bound by the chains and eyeing the door critically. Ami was trying to use her little bit of magic to get out but she wasn’t a match. I could see her frustration growing as she continued to try to leave.
“Still in the rooms. If you guys get caught, I’m going to leave you in there until the end. I want to see if anyone is able to break out. I didn’t put anything in the wards to cause harm if you use your magic. I figured any baddies in there can just tire themselves out instead.”
They nodded their understanding. Sarina didn’t look happy at all, but she still seemed willing.
I smiled at her. “Ready? I need to see what a strong magic user is capable of using against the traps, so throw all you have into staying free.”
Her confidence came back, and she grinned. “Game on.”
I smiled back. “Game on.”