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Elena
is 30% done
i soft dnf'd this the first time i tried to read it and i'm finding it more readable this time around but literally why invent a jimmy savile expy and then spend multiple pages telling me about the dude's crimes which are identical to jimmy savile's but for a few worldbuilding rounding errors, who on earth is this for
— Aug 03, 2025 04:53PM
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Elena
is 65% done
ohhhh girl this is where you ran out of energy and i can tell bc the prose is enervating and u keep repeating details. where are the EDITORS
— Aug 04, 2025 05:28PM
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Aug 04, 2025 06:34AM
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. wrote: "Put the book down"i should but we both know i won't
