Elena’s Reviews > Penance > Status Update

ohhhh girl this is where you ran out of energy and i can tell bc the prose is enervating and u keep repeating details. where are the EDITORS

i soft dnf'd this the first time i tried to read it and i'm finding it more readable this time around but literally why invent a jimmy savile expy and then spend multiple pages telling me about the dude's crimes which are identical to jimmy savile's but for a few worldbuilding rounding errors, who on earth is this for