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My wife got this me for Christmas! As a cultural exchange, I'm reading. Notes so far:
- The author really needs a lesson in not repeating herself. The exact same plane scene, with the exact same descriptors (golden rings, annoyingly/stupid hot) have played out multiple times so far, among others.
- Characters need to speak in distinct voices. No man (anyone?) would say a woman 'didn't have a stitch of makeup on'
— Jan 04, 2025 11:05AM
- The author really needs a lesson in not repeating herself. The exact same plane scene, with the exact same descriptors (golden rings, annoyingly/stupid hot) have played out multiple times so far, among others.
- Characters need to speak in distinct voices. No man (anyone?) would say a woman 'didn't have a stitch of makeup on'
