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M Khan is 28% done

“Did it have anything to do with how he knew me?”

Again.. so much repetition. It feels like the author is talking down to the reader by overexplaining everything. The emotions and thoughts are already clear, so all the extra elaboration feels unnecessary and frustrating. Fgs 🤦🏻‍♀️

— Aug 05, 2025 01:30AM

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M Khan is 29% done

Also i don’t like Griff… he’s just so mediocre. Almost as if his character archetype is missing something but I can’t quite put my finger on it.

— Aug 05, 2025 01:31AM

M Khan is 15% done

“Don’t worry about us.”

The family, side characters, aren’t fleshed out properly. They almost sound monotonous.

— Aug 05, 2025 01:27AM

M Khan is 13% done

“03:26. Only decisions of the heart, not the mind, happened at this hour.”

— Aug 05, 2025 01:26AM

M Khan is 12% done

“It was too good to be true.”

— Aug 05, 2025 01:26AM

M Khan is 11% done

“I wanted to leave the Lows, leave Pointe.”

Okay okay we get it… it’s being too repetitive now. Can we move forward with the rest of the story now, please?

— Aug 05, 2025 01:25AM

M Khan is 7% done

“I never deserved a prince, and fate knew that.”

Girl 🤦🏻‍♀️

— Aug 05, 2025 01:25AM

M Khan is 6% done

“our Tier provided the food, yet we starved.”

— Aug 05, 2025 01:24AM

M Khan is 5% done

“Dead?”

Bruh I forgot the blurb and this gave me such a shocker…

— Aug 05, 2025 01:24AM