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Why are we getting a random chapter from the weird villain guy? This adds literally nothing. Not that there was anything to add anyway to this over written nothing book

I’m reading a different story now. Somehow we went from shitty assassins to Khaleesi the Na’vi the saviour of these tribe people. Dumb. We already know that this tiny wittle stabby lady is going to win against the most seasoned warrior of this tribe

Say churn one more time. SAY IT ONE MORE TIME 🔫

This murder hobo bimbo makes me want to eat my ear balls. We’re also supposed to believe she’s killed so many people but so far the court has only seen one

Having your character graphically describe gore and murder doesn’t make them badass. It makes her fkin annoying.
“She was born in the darkness” really? A full adult wrote that seriously.

Yikes. Using male and female? Already excessive cursing. This is gonna be awful. Can’t wait