Cassie Prater’s Reviews > The Innkeeper > Status Update

1) Overuse of 'good girl'
2) Crass words coming from the mousey innocent girl don't jive for me.
3) Wade (ch. 15) constantly wanting to compare what he does to what his brother does is super cringe.

Chapter 10… okay but like aren’t they in the middle of the living room where any guest can come see.

Just got to chapter 2, and if this isn’t shaping up to be the plot of While You Were Sleeping then I don’t know what is.