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He was about to ask for more details when the scream of the emergency brakes filled the air and the train screeched to a halt. "Now what?"
There were three mounted men in the middle of the track. The brakes had been applied to keep the train from mowing them down.
And that latest sentence.. duh. I get it. Sadly, at page 22, this isn't even the first example of too much explanation.
— Oct 22, 2016 10:19AM
There were three mounted men in the middle of the track. The brakes had been applied to keep the train from mowing them down.
And that latest sentence.. duh. I get it. Sadly, at page 22, this isn't even the first example of too much explanation.
