Elaine’s Reviews > Saving Sparrow > Status Update
Elaine
is 40% done
Ch 22- pausing
Way too long, the abuse by Sparrow seems excessive and not needed for the story, I’m struggling to connect with any of the story in the “now”
— Aug 07, 2025 05:22PM
Way too long, the abuse by Sparrow seems excessive and not needed for the story, I’m struggling to connect with any of the story in the “now”
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