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I'm really enjoying this so far, but there are some really bad holes in the middle section following Clay. You can't go upriver for days and then go down a waterfall. The map bit isn't making a whole lot of sense given the timeline, either.
— Oct 24, 2016 07:02PM
The Waking Fire (The Draconis Memoria, #1)

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