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Ghazal
is on page 55 of 416
“Demon he said meanly” meanly?!
“ Starlings channeled energy from the stars, allowing them to move objects”.
What? How? I’m trying to wrap my head around whatever that means. How would Channeling energy from the stars would allow you to move objects? Makes no sense.
It would make more sense if it was like sky or wind
— Aug 10, 2025 07:01AM
“ Starlings channeled energy from the stars, allowing them to move objects”.
What? How? I’m trying to wrap my head around whatever that means. How would Channeling energy from the stars would allow you to move objects? Makes no sense.
It would make more sense if it was like sky or wind
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Ghazal
is on page 334 of 416
Om page 323
“She ran like she was running from something”
What ?! What is that sentence?
I hate this book with everything I have in me. Also I was under the impression that this was supposed to be a love triangle but I’m team Oro only because how can anyone be tea Grim?
— Aug 10, 2025 01:57PM
“She ran like she was running from something”
What ?! What is that sentence?
I hate this book with everything I have in me. Also I was under the impression that this was supposed to be a love triangle but I’m team Oro only because how can anyone be tea Grim?
Ghazal
is on page 305 of 416
“ the sun was a running yolk”
I don’t think I need to say more….
This author has an egg and yolk fetish
— Aug 10, 2025 01:15PM
I don’t think I need to say more….
This author has an egg and yolk fetish
Ghazal
is on page 250 of 416
The plot is intriguing but the writing is making me want to dnf
— Aug 10, 2025 11:29AM
Ghazal
is on page 44 of 416
I’m 5 chaoters in and I just feel like this either gonna be a great sorry or the worst story.
The book is written very poorly. Did this book have no editors? This is supposed to be the final draft?!
“The sun had fallen, it was just a yolky thing”
“Lightlark was a shining, cliffy thing”
Feels like a child is writing this, cliffy and yolky?
— Aug 10, 2025 06:37AM
The book is written very poorly. Did this book have no editors? This is supposed to be the final draft?!
“The sun had fallen, it was just a yolky thing”
“Lightlark was a shining, cliffy thing”
Feels like a child is writing this, cliffy and yolky?
